My second ReBoot fic? Much better than the first. Quite readable, actually, both logistically and characterization-wise. Even if it did end rather abruptly. I have a habit of doing that. I come to a point where the action stops, and I'm like, Oh shit! What the hell do I do now? So I end it. I should learn to stop doing that. I don't want to leave my readers going WTF? at the end of every story or they're going to get pissed and say mean things about me.
Strawberry Milkshake Whoppers are the shit. Hersheys has regained my love.
Strawberry Milkshake Whoppers are the shit. Hersheys has regained my love.